Monday, November 18, 2019
What I'am thankful for and who
Hi everyone! Today I'am gone tell you what I'am thankful for and who. My parents for sending me to study in America for loving me being really nice and good parents. My brother for helping me with my homework If I didn't understand it, playing games with me, going to movies and quest rooms. My sister for being a nice sister. My grandparents for sitting with me when my parents went somewhere, for cooking really good food and being nice grandparents. My friends and best friends for helping me for being nice to me and being a good friends. I'am thankful Mrs.Berzinskas for helping me with my grammar, all my airlines and being nice advisor. Am thankful for all people that ever helped me and were nice to me. Am thankful to God or world for all of this that is happening right now in world or Universe. Thank you for listening, I wish you enjoyed it, wait for my next blog.
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Your writing is showing great improvement this year. You are using much more challenging vocabulary, and your sentences are moving from simple to complex. With that, you must be VERY careful when using punctuation and tense. If this happens all of the time... USE PRESENT TENSE. Correct those verb choices. Also, look for subjects and verbs and conclusion of thought. Is the sentence over? If so, use ending punctuation marks (periods, question marks, etc.) NOT COMMAS!
ReplyDeleteThis is a very thoughtful response! You have a lot of great people in your life! I am glad that I am able to help you!